Today we showed our progress to Mr Ron. He gave us some great tips on how make our plot more understandable and have the continuity needed. He also asked us to make some changes to our storyline.
Mr Ron also asked to change our models as it looked to complexed and it also looked too tedious.
He also gave us some useful tips on improvising our storyline.
After taking down all the important pointers he gave us we decided to work on it, so as a group we sat down and started to brainstorm on improvising the story. Mr Ron also told us to have a beginning, conflict and resolve of the climax.
In our case showing of the resolution and show the right way it would be done.
After brainstorming, we decided to simplify the model,which will make the riging and the animation more easier to do. We also decided to amke our model look appealing and cute to the audience.
There was also a need to additional equipments like cannons, guns and pistols of various sizes and a shelf to put the guns.
We also came up with extra ideas like rabbit ponting to the signboard
Putting in subtitles like what most commercial will show.
Showing the correct and the wrong way of wearing the ear-muffs by using the re-wind method.
Showing the rabbit carrying the correct pistol size and the hunter carrying the wrong size leading to him falling down.
Putting in logo for the uniform.
As for the resolution, show the rabbit swirling the gun which is according to its proper size.
or
the rabbit throwing up the gun to show its light
the rabbit holding the pistol on his palms.
The changes will only be from shots 5 to shots 12.
Shot 5
Rabbit turns to look at the hunter.
Shot 6
-This shot will be a 45 degree frontal shot.
- The hunter will be walking towards the camera(wall)
Shot 7
- Rabbit pointing to the score
-45 degree pan in shot.
Shot 8
- Hunter asks the rabbit to look
-45 degree shot
Shot 9
- Panning across the variety of guns
- Hunters hands picking up the largest gun
Shot 10
-Close-up of the poster
Shot 11
- Hunter looking at rabbit
-falling down
-Camera angle would be over the shoulder.
-this would be a continuous shot.
Shot 12
-Hunter gets up again
-45 degree angle
- stands up to the camera view
This was the soundwaves ripple effect done by Poh Ling.
http://shalinisativil.blogspot.com/2011/02/safety-at-workday-5friday.html
This is our final previs done by Poh Ling:
Mr Ron also asked to change our models as it looked to complexed and it also looked too tedious.
He also gave us some useful tips on improvising our storyline.
After taking down all the important pointers he gave us we decided to work on it, so as a group we sat down and started to brainstorm on improvising the story. Mr Ron also told us to have a beginning, conflict and resolve of the climax.
In our case showing of the resolution and show the right way it would be done.
After brainstorming, we decided to simplify the model,which will make the riging and the animation more easier to do. We also decided to amke our model look appealing and cute to the audience.
There was also a need to additional equipments like cannons, guns and pistols of various sizes and a shelf to put the guns.
We also came up with extra ideas like rabbit ponting to the signboard
Putting in subtitles like what most commercial will show.
Showing the correct and the wrong way of wearing the ear-muffs by using the re-wind method.
Showing the rabbit carrying the correct pistol size and the hunter carrying the wrong size leading to him falling down.
Putting in logo for the uniform.
As for the resolution, show the rabbit swirling the gun which is according to its proper size.
or
the rabbit throwing up the gun to show its light
the rabbit holding the pistol on his palms.
The changes will only be from shots 5 to shots 12.
Shot 5
Rabbit turns to look at the hunter.
Shot 6
-This shot will be a 45 degree frontal shot.
- The hunter will be walking towards the camera(wall)
Shot 7
- Rabbit pointing to the score
-45 degree pan in shot.
Shot 8
- Hunter asks the rabbit to look
-45 degree shot
Shot 9
- Panning across the variety of guns
- Hunters hands picking up the largest gun
Shot 10
-Close-up of the poster
Shot 11
- Hunter looking at rabbit
-falling down
-Camera angle would be over the shoulder.
-this would be a continuous shot.
Shot 12
-Hunter gets up again
-45 degree angle
- stands up to the camera view
This was the soundwaves ripple effect done by Poh Ling.
http://shalinisativil.blogspot.com/2011/02/safety-at-workday-5friday.html
This is our final previs done by Poh Ling:
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